Maryanna:
you did a good job just be a little more Descriptive : )
Cecilia:
I think you could have gone into more depth on you support for what type of love it was but I think you had some really good points as well! Good Job!
Amber:
Excelente, chico! Muy bueno! (If you don't know what that means, ask me!)
kristin:
um. i don't think that was the point of the story, but good job?
becca:
bacca says wow!
Whitney:
The way you put it is different and that makes it neat.
Amber:
You represented both sides fairly. Maybe you should be a lawyer, eh?